On the banks of a river, a boy sees and
hears a girl laughing, the most glorious music, and falls in love. Time,
however, is not the same for them. Erin is human; Kell is something other.
Sunday, February 8, 2026
For Erin he plays the most beautiful music
Friday, October 24, 2025
Sunday, September 14, 2025
Be careful of what you wish for
Be careful of what you wish for.
The world Luvanor has four continents, but
the small one in the south remains abandoned after massive volcanic eruptions
destroyed the land a long time ago, creating simultaneously an impassable
trench in the ocean few dare cross.
This is also a love story.
Saturday, August 23, 2025
Translating Minstrel ...
Many of you know I am originally from the tip of Africa. Grew up bilingual in both English and Afrikaans as first languages, but in recent years (er, decades!) I haven't spent much time with Afrikaans. That's changed a bit because I thought I'd try my hand at translating some of my short stories …
… and here's the first result! Pass the word to any Afrikaans folks you may know!!
fantasie
romanse
sprokie
Tuesday, May 27, 2025
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Monday, June 3, 2024
Excerpt: Minstrel of the Water Willow - Marking Time
To step from shadows is to know light
Storms came and
went.
A fire swept through the valley
and annihilated great swathes of land. Many of the trees on the fringes of the
forests all around succumbed, although the deep regions remained untouched. Drought
was supreme for two summer seasons. The coldest winter in all memory followed.
Erin remained despite every
tribulation. She had chosen to remove herself from her society. After the death
of her daughter she lost all interest. He no longer cared much for his social
circle either. The unhappier she became, the more he withdrew from others close
to him, including his parents. Most days he hunkered, watching Erin. It was a senseless
obsession, but truth was there was no Fay woman who drew him as much as she
did.
While he was older than she was
in years, he appeared far younger, and thus kept his distance. She would see
him as a youth and would not understand the years already in his mind.
How utterly unfair. He wished he
was human.
His music suffered. More
correctly, his reputation as a minstrel suffered, for he rarely took to the
circuit to play for others.
He played for Erin, softly, on
the edge of hearing.
Kell watched her gradually regain
her physical strength and her purpose for life. He saw how she tended her
vegetables in the fields in view to him and noticed fat and healthy chickens
roaming freely. She was successful at both growing and rearing and soon had
excess with which to trade for other goods. Twice a month she loaded her small
cart, and set off to market.
Often he would then head into the
smaller villages and make music for his own keep.
When Erin turned forty, with fine
lines at her eyes, he noticed how she gazed across the river as if sensing his
presence when he merely watched her, when he made no lyrical sound. Was she as
aware of him as he was of her? If she was, never did she say a word, although
once or twice she did smile secretly.
His heart set up an uneven rhythm
when she did so.
Many of the Fay moved into the
highlands in those years, for more humans had entered the valley. His parents
too chose to relocate, but he was determined to stay and thus took possession
of his childhood home as his own. His mother was sad, reading in him the signs
of unrequited love, knowing also the choice was his. He was considered adult
among his kind.
Humans, however, would regard him
as a youth.
On the banks of a river, a boy sees and hears a girl
laughing, the most glorious music, and falls in love. Time, however, is not the
same for them. Erin is human; Kell is something other.
MINSTRELMINSTREL
Sunday, March 24, 2024
Excerpt: ECHO (Seasons 1) - Grey ghosts in white fog
There
were hundreds. By the gods. How had they ended up trapped? However it came to
pass wasn’t the main issue, though. He needed all lost souls to congregate for
this to work. Potentially, any stragglers in the aftermath would not again
approach, thinking it would end their existence, terrible as it was for them.
“I
see you,” he said aloud. “I can help you.” The forms stilled, but he did notice
a thickening in the rear as if many more suddenly joined the crowd. Good. “I
swear to send you into your Afterlife, if you will grant me the opportunity to
do so.”
A low
whistle in front of his horse revealed that Sabian had arrived, although Echo
couldn’t see him. “How many, Echo?” came the man’s disembodied question.
“No
clue. Can you do this?”
“They
are wary, but yes. Talk to them while I prepare.”
Echo
raised his voice. “Do you hear me? Someone has come with the talent to take you
into the realms beyond this one where you may finally be at peace. Whatever
lies in your souls now, whether fury or numbness, does not determine your
destination. No supernatural power judges you for reacting to this current
state of waiting. Where you go is determined by who you truly are in your deep
recesses. You are Diluvan, and you walk in the Light. Please, we mean you no
harm. Will you gather all for this to be?”
Sight
now was more about grey than white, which meant more and more ghostly Diluvans
were entering the assembly. The greyness undulated, due to arrivals requiring
space, and then abruptly, all movement ceased. Did that mean all were present?
Did it mean they accepted?
“They
are ready,” Sabian murmured. “Well done, Echo. Do no more; I will take it from
here.”
A
dead kind of silence descended then, one that included utter motionlessness.
Even the fog felt otherworldly, without substance. The sense of cloying wetness
evaporated entirely.
Then,
poof.
The
fog simply vanished.
Blue
sky blazed overhead.
Even unseen
Sabian was gone. That wasn’t as much an astonishment, however; Sabian needed to
leave with the souls.
Okyd
shouted somewhere, and the sound of his horse’s hooves was loud in the
stillness.
Mabellee
cleared her throat. “What, Echo?”
Brief
as the event had been, he had not the wherewithal to explain. Oreun indicated
that she would, and thus he released the woman, kneeing his mount forward. A
few paces removed, he halted again to lace his hands on his head, and inhaled
massive breaths repeatedly. By the gods, that had been strange. Other.
Fair-haired
and blue-eyed Sabian reappeared then, grinning, and Echo slid from his mount.
The two men entered a back-slapping embrace, something that was all about
relief.
“Thanks,
man,” Echo said fervently as they drew apart.
“I’m
agog as to how a bunch of Diluvans managed to stick around,” Sabian laughed. “They
will be fine. I received only gratefulness as they dissipated.” He gazed around
… and saw Oreun. “That’s a Kallanon. What’s going on here?”
Might
be an idea to fill Sabian in, who could then take the message to Torrullin and
Elianas. “You have an hour or two?”
Still
watching the dragonne, Sabian muttered, “For this I’ll give you a day or two.”
Grinning from ear to ear, Echo started talking.
The world Luvanor has four continents, but the small one in the south remains abandoned after massive volcanic eruptions destroyed the land a long time ago, creating simultaneously an impassable trench in the ocean few dare cross.
Abandoned. Uninhabited. Perhaps dangerous. The type of adventure Echayn Valla, aka Echo, goes in search of, hoping to discover remains from that bygone era, or perhaps he hopes to find something new about himself.
Don’t they say be careful of what you wish for? Echo is about to embark on the greatest misadventure of his life. Nothing is as it seems, as he will soon realise. Join him now for a journey of discovery that will test his wits, his strength … and his heart.
This is also a love story.
Tuesday, February 13, 2024
Wednesday, February 7, 2024
A Romantic Fairy Tale
On the banks of a river, a boy sees and hears a girl
laughing, the most glorious music, and falls in love. Time, however, is not the
same for them. Erin is human; Kell is something other.
Friday, November 4, 2022
Sunday, October 23, 2022
Chapter 1: Minstrel of the Willow Water
On the banks of a river, a boy sees and hears a girl laughing, the most glorious music, and falls in love. Time, however, is not the same for them. Erin is human; Kell is something other.
Kell watches her from the shadows under the willow at the water’s edge, refusing to surrender to their differences. For Erin he plays the most beautiful music, for he may never speak to her and she cannot ever see him. Music becomes their words.
Love, however, cannot measure time. The minstrel maintains his vigil; his muse listens for his song, and both move through the years alone, until the day something changes …
Chapter 1
Laughter is a bridge between strangers
Lines formed an
intricate map upon her face.
She was old now, but to him she
remained ever beautiful. He knew the reasons for her wrinkles, what she had
endured in life. He had watched her since she was two years old.
Squatting under the willow where
the fronds swept the surface of the placid river, he observed her kneeling with
infinite care until she was able to reach the clear pond from where she drew
her drinking water.
So slow now, when it felt like
yesterday when she came squealing in happy abandon down to the water’s edge,
honey ringlets bouncing.
She peered around as if expecting
someone, but he knew she was alone here. She was not looking out for someone
expected. She had been alone a long time.
He was the only one who watched,
although she had never seen him. Sometimes, though, he had the clearest sense
she was still aware of him, despite her withdrawal in recent years. She no
longer concerned herself with living, only with dying, but in the past, when
her step was sprightlier and her eyesight clearer, she would gaze across the
expanse of the river directly into the shadows under the willow. Once she even
summoned him; she had known he watched. She had not looked at his face, but she
told him music meant everything to her.
He realised now she listened intently
to the natural silence as if hoping to hear the notes of life itself.
Closing his eyes, he wished he
had brought his small lyre to pick out gentle tones, to weave them into the
birdsong surrounding them.
Eighty years ago he was himself a boy, splashing in the
shallows in summer’s heat, when he heard the sound of laughter.
Instantly his mother dragged him
into the trees beyond where the shadows were dense, abandoning the cones and
twigs they had gathered for the hearth back home, but he saw her.
A little girl ran towards the
river with her mother trailing after, admonishing her to slow down.
“Kell, be quiet now,” his mother
had whispered in his ear, and he had not understood why.
He wanted to go to the girl. He
wanted to laugh with her. She was so pretty and so happy, so bright, so new.
She was not as careful as her
mother had warned her to be, and fell into the water. A tiny shriek of fear and
surprise drifted across to him. His mother was forced to hold him back when he
moved to go to her aid.
“Silly, look how wet you are!” Her
mother, laughing, pulled her out. “Come on, silly, let’s get you home and dry.
Are you hungry?”
They disappeared up the gentle
slope towards the old cottage no one had lived in for many years. They held
hands and laughed together as they went.
For a long time he thought her
name was Silly.
The cottage was not in view of
the river, but he had seen it once. In search of wild herbs, his father carried
him across the river that day and they passed it by. It was pretty, but needed
much care to make it a home again.
Later he realised her name was
Erin.
That was the day she went and
lost herself and her mother ran along the water’s edge frantically searching for
her daughter, calling, “Erin! Erin, where are you?”
That was also the day his father
yanked him forcibly into the shadows of the forest and told him never to return
to the river, to leave the mother and daughter to their lives. He had already been
to the water many times hoping to catch sight of her again, and he was told in
firm words that he had proven himself too rash to wander unsupervised.
“She is lost!” he shouted at his
father. “She will be scared!”
“Kell, she is human and we do not
speak to humans. They may not see us. I will watch over her until she is found,
but you will return home now.”
Thus was that also the day he
realised he was something other. Not
human.
It was the worst day of his life.
Thursday, September 29, 2022
Chapter 1: Ethereal Musician
Alayna lives as a recluse in the giant redwood forest far from
prying eyes. When intruders break into her home with the intention of robbing
and using her, a man with vivid green eyes becomes an unlikely saviour. The
instant they see each other their fates are sealed. Ben and Alayna have the
kind of attraction that reeks of a celestial mandate.
Chapter One
THE BLACKTOP GLISTENED after the rain, a dark snake
unfurling through the redwood forest. Cat eyes shone as if tiny creatures
populated the yellow lines.
The ripe smell of rich earth
competed with the distinct aroma of wet tar, and drips of fresh water plinked
through the foliage. Nearby a spotted owl delivered its distinguishing call.
Although it was early yet in the
afternoon, the gloom above gave the appearance of approaching night.
Set back slightly from the
switchback road, a small cottage huddled, nearly smothered in ivy huddled
beneath the giants populating northern California, wisps of smoke curling from
a stone chimney. Azaleas and rhododendron vied with prolific sword ferns for
space in a small garden.
On the porch an ancient bench
watched the days pass by, whether wet or dry. A red squirrel perched on the
gate post, unmoving until a woman came out the front door, and then he hurtled
up the nearest bole.
Grinning, Alayna gave a whistle and
left an offering of nuts and fruit in the stone platter upon the low wall.
Already, as she turned away, the squirrel shimmied downward. Soon, she knew,
his furry family would join him.
NOTHING OF NOTE happened in the small town of
Legget, besides tourists arriving to take photos of their cars driving through
the Chandelier Tree, or of themselves standing within the carved arch in the
massive trunk.
They stopped for a bite, maybe some
gas, and then most moved on to the nearest camping grounds. At certain times of
the year it was busy, but at others nothing much occurred.
Jack and Shaun argued with Ben
outside the local diner. The place was closed and a For Sale sign sat in the window.
“We need cash, bud, or we’ll never
get to San Francisco,” Jack snapped out, irritated that he needed to repeat
himself. “This one-horse town has zip for us; the tourist season is over, man.
I say we grab a few dollars from the gas station and head south.”
His scrawny body quivered with
intent.
“Yeah, hanging around here will only
get us stuck and bored,” Shaun said. “There’s nothing to eat either.”
They were quite the opposites, Jack
and Shaun, for Shaun was fat. He was stupid, too.
“Shut up,” Jack snarled at him.
“What do you know?” He shifted his attention to the third member of their trio.
“Ben, come on. Shaun and me, we’ll
grab the dough, just keep the engine running, man, like always. Man, it’s not
hard.”
Ben stared at him. “And how far will
a few dollars get us? I’m telling you, it’s a waste of effort.”
“You’re just a fucking wuss. We’ll
find other places along the way, get more. For fuck’s sake, man, do you want to
stay in this empty shithole?”
Ben lifted green eyes to the forest
surrounding them on all sides. A slight breeze promised rain later as it
ruffled his fair hair. Yes, he could stay. He hankered after some peace and
quiet. Jack, however, would pull a knife on him if he dared suggest it. The
weasel had a mean streak, and no conscience. He liked that knife too damn much.
“I’ll wait outside,” Ben eventually
said.
Jack slapped him on the back and
Shaun laughed. “Get the wheels. We’re going in.” Jack grabbed Shaun’s wobbling
arm and they strode across the road.
Their inane giggling disturbed the
quietness in the air.
Idiots. Folk would remember them.
Frowning, Ben climbed into the
driver’s seat and turned the ignition key. The old blue Chevy spluttered twice
and then caught. Eyeing the progress of the other two, hating himself for
giving in yet again, he timed his swing and landed in a squeal of brakes before
the glass doors as they vanished into the shop.
He didn’t watch. He didn’t want to
see another unsuspecting kid manning the register frightened out of his wits by
the insane Jack and the stupidity of that oaf Shaun.
It was time to leave those two
behind, but not in this quiet place. They would do too much harm here. He’d
either abandon them somewhere more populated or simply walk away when Jack
wasn’t looking.
The rear doors slammed as the two flung
bodily into the car.
“Get fucking driving!” Jack
screeched.
The Chevy sped away, heading north.
ALAYNA FINISHED EATING the vegetable soup she’d prepared
for her supper and placed the remains in the fridge, along with the butter.
Tomorrow night’s meal. She wrapped the rest of her freshly baked loaf and put
it in the old wooden bread box.
While rinsing her few dishes, she
stared out into the darkening forest. It was autumn now and summer’s
ever-present fog began to vie with the downpours that heralded winter’s
approach. It was always somewhat on the cooler side here, but she preferred
that. Heat had never summoned her, held no allure. Heat wasn’t good for her,
point of fact. She was comfortable in the mists, in the bracing air of a
fertile forest.
The fog thickened. Soon it would be so
silent out, one would believe oneself entirely alone in the universe. The road
would remain empty, isolated, and without movement but for the occasional elk
crossing its expanse on a journey through the night time forest. This was
perfection. Silence and isolation.
After the life she had, she desired
nothing else.
This was a place and time in which
to recuperate. People drained one of energy.
Finishing the dishes, she set two
lanterns alight and carried one to her desk in the living room, leaving the other
in the kitchen window. Setting it to one side, she drew her laptop closer,
flipped the lid, and called up her work in progress. She enjoyed the rustic
lifestyle, but her laptop was her mainstay of technology.
This book was taking a bit longer
than the others did. She found that the wildlife offered greater distraction
these days than her mind usually conjured.
Still, she had to eat.
It was a few small edits from
finished. She started typing.
“STOP!” SHAUN SCREAMED, and Ben slammed on the brakes, nearly
wrenching his head from his shoulders.
“What the fuck, man?” Jack demanded,
craning around to the back. He’d earlier clambered into the front passenger
seat, almost causing a goddamn calamity when his elbow ‘accidentally’ hit Ben
in the jaw.
“I saw a light,” Shaun mumbled
sheepishly.
Ben drew in a breath. Not this
again. Some unsuspecting household was about to be robbed. “No one lives out
here,” he said. “This is a waste of time.”
Jack eyed him. “You’re going soft,
bro. We may have to teach you a lesson, toughen you up a bit.” He eyed Shaun
next. “Where’d you see it?”
“Up a ways.” Shaun jerked a meaty
thumb over his shoulder.
“Back up, Ben,” Jack ordered. “This
isolated, maybe they got gas tanks out back, in case.”
Yeah, the idiots didn’t think it out
too well. Not that they ever did. So they robbed the register, got a few
dollars, but paper didn’t create gas, did it? They should’ve filled the tank
before leaving Legget behind and instead they now raced along a dark road as empty
as the tank would soon be.
These two assholes hadn’t yet
realised he deliberately drove north into the highlands, knowing there was
little to be had along the way. He intended to engineer his walk away. He’d had
enough of them and didn’t want to land up behind bars for theft or worse. All
three of them on foot? He’d leave them behind within minutes.
Ben backed up, and there it was, a
light.
A lantern in a cottage window.
Blinking, he stared at it. It called
to him, like the proverbial lamp in the storm.
His heart thundered into rapid
motion.
He didn’t like this.
This felt wrong. Something here was
not as it seemed.
“Developing a conscience, bud?” Jack
punched him on the arm, hard.
“Fuck off,” Ben said, bringing the
car to a halt.
ALAYNA LIFTED HER head, swiping dark blonde strands
of hair from her face. Did a car just stop outside?
Standing, she lifted the lantern on
her desk. Maybe a traveler was in some kind of trouble.
The lamp slid from her grasp when
three young men hurtled through the front door, which shattered on impact and instantly
flames licked at the ancient rug.
“Fuck! Stupid bitch!” Stamping the
blaze roughly out, the vocal one of the three snapped out, “You alone?”
Of course she was. To claim she
wasn’t would simply reveal she was a liar and that was potentially worse for
her. “I’m alone. May I help you? Would you boys like something to eat?”
“Yeah,” said the fat one, grinning.
“Shut up, Shaun!” The thin, dirty one, glared over his shoulder and then
crowded into her personal space. “You got any gas?”
Ah. She understood the situation in
a heartbeat. “There’s some in the shed out back, yes.”
“Shaun, go!” Scrawny screeched.
The final young man in the trio, she
noted, hadn’t moved a muscle since entering. After watching his buddy snuff the
flames, he had glanced into the kitchen, to the other lantern, and then
remained motionless. It was the strangest thing; his face was perfectly
composed, as if nothing disturbed his inner self.
Was that serenity, she wondered, or
the face of a psychopath? Why was she thinking this now? Clearly they were here
to cause harm and whatever he was inside had little bearing.
Now he did move, and she discovered
she was holding her breath. As Shaun shoved past him into the night, muttering
about always getting the shit end of the stick, he stepped aside with barely
veiled dislike.
Clearly, then, not so serene.
The skinny fellow looked her up and
down insolently. “You’re a little old for me, under normal circumstances, but
you could still keep a man warm, s’pose. What you? Like forty or something?”
Dread crawled across her skin as
bumps of puckered flesh. Her gaze flicked to the silent one, somehow drawn
there. Her blood ran cold when she read the expression on his face. No, not his
face. That remained carefully schooled. It was in his eyes … incredible eyes,
dear God. This boy was about to commit murder. And she wasn’t his victim.
“You will regret it,” she said then,
feeling she needed to warn him of the dangers to his soul.
His green gaze shifted to her and
seemed to pierce her soul. “I don’t
think so,” he replied. There was no emotion in his voice either.
“What the fuck …” the scrawny one
muttered. “Ben, fucking get her and hold her, I’m getting fucking hard here,
man.”
Ben inclined his head. “Sure, Jack.”
He approached as Jack unzipped his
filthy jeans. As he drew abreast, he snatched Jack into a head lock.
“Worm!” he spat.
Jack struggled, gasping for air,
arms flailing uselessly. Clearly Jack wasn’t a fighter. He was all air and
sound.
“Behind you!” Alayna gasped,
noticing fat Shaun’s shadow in the doorway.
Ben whirled, putting his back to
her, still holding a wheezing Jack. “Back off, Shaun.”
“What you doing, man?”
No one was now looking at her. She
stepped back unobtrusively until she felt the rifle stock under her fingers.
Gripping it, she swung it around, holding it aloft. As she did so, Shaun barreled
towards the other two, screaming obscenities at the top of his voice.
Alayna pulled the trigger.
The fat boy hurtled backwards and
toppled through the door. A gurgle sounded and then … nothing. She didn’t see
where the bullet made impact, it happened that fast.
An audible crack of snapping bone
came next and she shifted her gaze to the other two, in time to see and hear
the gaunt one hit the wooden floor, his neck at an odd angle.
That had taken both strength and
determination.
Perhaps pure desperation.
Utter silence enveloped the small
space.
And then Ben said, “I’ll remove the
evidence, and then be on my way. You might have to scrub the deck outside after
I’m gone.”
Alayna nodded. It was as much as she
could manage at that point.
His gaze again stripped her soul
naked, before he bent and hooked his hands under Jack’s arms and dragged him
out. A car door slammed soon after.
The sound of a heavier body
slithering with difficulty along her garden path sounded, and then a door
banged again.
Moments later Ben darkened her
doorway. There was no expression on his face. “Lock up. Oh, and put a fresh
round in that chamber.”
He touched his forehead and was
gone. An engine roared to life outside and tires screeched on the slippery
surface.
The sound vanished into the
distance, heading south.
Tuesday, March 31, 2020
Wednesday, January 8, 2020
Audiobook: Ethereal Musician
Thursday, December 26, 2019
Monday, December 16, 2019
Another Bloody Christmas
Monday, December 2, 2019
Audio Book: Minstrel of the Water Willow
Tuesday, March 12, 2019
Review: Kei's Gift by Ann Somerville
Kei's Gift by Ann SomervilleMy rating: 5 of 5 stars
This is a long book (just how I like them!) but well worth it. I enjoyed the setting, the premise, the characters, and every dilemma, whether of war or love. The emotional turmoil between Kei and Arman is simply riveting, and I spent days reading this and ignoring other tasks ... because I had to know how it works out between these two. Highly recommended!
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